Banaaye humne rishtey, aansoo ke dard ke
Khusioyon ki hum mein chaah ek thi
Ek hi thi manzil, raah ek thi
badalte rahe chehare, nigaah ek thi
bachaa ke humnein rakha hai teri yaad ko
Bhulaane ki sabki salaah ek thi
Tez hue khanjar aur badle hain haath
Par ghaav ek tha aur Aah ek thi
Haalaat se jab bhi jhagada hua mera
Khuda ke siwa meri panaah ek thi
Teri nigaahon mein jadoo tha kya
Unmein to raat-o-subah ek thi
Tumse ummeedein meri hi thi adhik
Behlao ek tha, nibaah ek thi.
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About Me
- Kumar Anshul
- We think. Ideas sometime take the shape of poetry , sometime prose, sometime memory, and most of the time nothing. I stack nothings at Interface (my first blog). For prose, I try and capture them on ‘fiction-in-life’. Poems go in serching for rhythm. Jugalbandi with Piyush has a separate blog, and so has forwards. There are more things, more genres coming. What do I do with them? Start a new Blog page.
1 comment:
shuruaat jitni achhi rahi anth utna achha nahin raha...
aisa lagta hai jaise likhte likhte bhatkaav aa gaya hai...
magar kuchh panktiyan khoobsoorat hain bahut..jaise-
Khushiyon ki hum mein chah ek thi..
very nice..
khuda ke siwa meri panah ek thi...
is pankti ka kuchh arth chhupa hua sa lagta hai..
panah ek thi..matlab kya??
teri nigaahon mein jaadoo tha kya
unmein to raat-o-subah ek thi...
is kavita mein in panktiyon ka hona is kavita ko kamzor karta hai..
khyal bhi halke hain kavita ke hisaab se aur meter bhi sahi nahin hai
Tez hue khanzar aur badle hain haath
Par ghaav ek tha aur aah ek thi..
yeh panktiyaan bahut achhi hain..
padh kar achha laga..maza aaya
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